Jerry while taking an annual vacation to the seaside, Jerry 's mother allow him, to go to a near by rocky bay.This is w here he stubbles upon underwater tunel after seeing some older boys swim through it. Jerry decides to priove that he is becoming a man. as the story unfolds, it becomes clear that Jerry 's swim through the tunnel was extremely foolish.When Jerry was having nose bleeding, his mother told him that he ''shouldn't over do things'' she then forced him to take the next day off and go with her.
Jerry and his mother had a vacation on a french coast at Villa. The beach is large with sandy but there is a smaller part.The story took place in 7-10 days. the mood of the story is somewhat light feel to the story and somewhat dark side when Jerry almost drowned.
MAIN CHARECTER
Jerry is an eleven year old english boy on a vacation with his mother on abeach.His mother is a widow and she was a bit protective over her only son.Jerry was childish and older boys didn't like him. He wanted acceptance from his peers but they ignored him of his harsh reality.Jerry almost drowned one day at the beach. He is a jelous person
Jerry is an eleven year old english boy on a vacation with his mother on abeach.His mother is a widow and she was a bit protective over her only son.Jerry was childish and older boys didn't like him. He wanted acceptance from his peers but they ignored him of his harsh reality.Jerry almost drowned one day at the beach. He is a jelous person
4/10. You used wrong information and not enough sentences for the plot. You also have lots of wrong spelt words and grammar errors. more details needed.
ReplyDelete3/10 many spelling mistakes and grammar. where did you get some information?
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